Monday, February 22, 2010

My version of Charolette Temple

Nelson was flocked by women all the time but resisted the urge for he was in love with Sharon. Sharon is a goody goody and would never engage in sexual activities with Nelson because she knew her family would disprove. Her best friend Kari would always make fun of her and laugh at her because she thought Sharon was a prude. Nelson and Kari would always pick on Sharon and make her feel horrible about herself. Nelson and Kari wanted to take a trip to Las Vegas, but they could not get Sharon to go. Sharon's parents told her to stay away from Las Vegas because it was the city full of sins! One Friday night Sharon and Kari go to this party to meet Nelson. Kari kept giving her drinks and making her drink them fast. Sharon did'nt exactly know what she was drinking but she knew she was feeling good. The next morning Sharon wakes up in a motel in a place she is not familiar. She looks out the window and sees a sign flashing, "WELCOME TO VEGAS!" She immediatly starts freaking out and reaches for her cell phone. The only problem was her cell phone was dead. There is a loud bang on the door and Sharon answers it, it's Nelson!! Sharon starts feeling better but wants answers. The last thing she remebered was dancing at the party. Nelson tells her that him and Kari had taken her for a trip to experience what real partying is. He then goes on to tell her that they had a great time (wink wink). Sharon is still confused and wants to know where Kari is. Nelson tells her that she went home with a guy she met at the club. Nelson continues with stories from the night and tells Sharon that they had eloped. Sharon starts crying. She is disgusted with herself. All she can think about is what will her parents think and if they are searching for her. Nelson tells Sharon to pipe down because they aren't ever going back home. She is stuck in Vegas with him!
Months have gone by and Sharon still has not heard from her family. She is so depressed and has noticed she has been feeling ill. Nelson jokes around with her about being pregnant, but to Sharon that is not a joke. She went to the drug store and took a pregnancy test. The test showed up positive!! Sharon is shocked!! She goes and tells Nelson, but before she could finish tleling him the news, Nelson ran out the door. Nelson was never heard of or seen again.

2 comments:

  1. Good version. There is always someone who wants ruin another person's life. In your story the nice girl is not willing to corrupt herself. I like that because I would like to believe that not all girls are sex crazed.
    With ecstasy on the rise your story is highly believable. I know of a young girl who was at a club and must have been given more than she can handle because she ended up in rehabilitation for months trying to regain her mobility.
    Poor Sharon, lost and turned out, I hope she has a better end than Charlotte Temple. It would be nice to have Nelson end up longing for her, but I guess that would not be real life.

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  2. I love this story! Its a great spin off. I totally agree that this situation could arise. I am sure there are people who have been int his particular situation, especially in Vegas. It reminds me of the movie the Hangover, when they wake up and cant recall any of the night before. This story is tragic but a reality for many. Hopefully Sharon and her baby are happy and healthy for a long time. Single moms are soemtimes the best way to go! I know mine was :)

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